Magazine proposal pitch

 This is the magazine proposal which i pitched to my class. I received feedback from my teacher and peers. There were few points which i missed out however my tutor asked me questions which  answered. From the feedback i received the audience helped me decide to name my magazine 'Mayhem. Also they chose the font which they believed went well with my genre for my masthead. I believe my proposal was well written however whilst presenting i did not mention everything which i wrote about in the propsal.